Tuesday, May 18, 2010

drifting in the night

He walks out of the elevator,
lips slightly ajar... chewing gum...
his mouth moves to the echo
of her hips as they go
boom boom boom
the bouncing of her bum
reflected in his eyes...

eyes salivating with desire
not knowing that mine do the same
I capture the upcurling of his lip
to the left
and mine lifts in response
to the right
as though instructed...
as though...
as though...

about his passing hips
my gaze swivels
as we drift,
gracefully and apart
i into the elevator,
he into the night...
pop pop pop
pops his gum...
parelleling the delicious desire
pop pop popping in me,
for him...
in him... for her...

the lift swallows me
as the night does the same to him...
and my throat is dry...

5 comments:

Mali /// @skattie_what said...

too beautiful my friend. I looooooooove it. U're obviously in an inspired space. Monogamy is good for you.

Unknown said...

ndiqhwaba izandla ndizibuza ukuba azi ngubani lo, yi-elevator yaphi le?uzakundenza istalker nje,lol...........love it

Nopasika said...

Why didn't you say so. Ndiyalulandela ke ngoku. I like, I like. Am working on mine as a matter of fact as we speak. You might not feel it though, it will be about parenting...feel free to check it out though but I will certainly follow you.

Unknown said...

hehehehehehehe... ok because i'm convinced no one reads my blog i wasn't expecting comments... thanks guys :)

Pasi share the link, i will definitely check it out...

as for monogamy... well Mali, we know how that ended... hehehehehehe... polygamy is the future...

Amuzweni Lerato said...

Wow. this is really good.